Feedback

We showed a draft of ou music video to the rest of the class and asked them for feedback on parts they thought were good, parts they thought were bad and ow they could be imprioved and whether hey understood the narrative.
The main comments we recieved were:

Good                           Bad                            How to improve

• The variety of shots are good 
• The shots of the artist singing are nice but they could be used more throughout the video rather than just at the begining 
• The editing is good and yo ucan tell a lot of efort and time has been put into that but a few parts are slightly out of time with the beat of the music.
• Even though there are supposed to be random shots some of them are a bit too random and confuse the audience too much.
• More random shots could be added to make it clear that they are supposed to be random and confusing for the audience 
• The narrative is easy to understand at the beginnig but some people did not get that they were supposed to be arguing and breaking up at the end